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he said:
i think I care for you--
but my depth perception,
it's all off.  you see, no
matter where you stand
i cannot taste your colors.

coyly, madame suggested:
in-
coverage of the trial
coverage and analysis of the ongoing violence
will you speak for the accused?

and he:
six men accused!

in tumultous tones:
we can be abstract or concrete,
either qualitative or quantitative,
any number of different concepts--

a raised voice:
the maximum exceeded;
you cannot change this limit!
there is no new value to specify,
no time to execute the script (it

has timed out)
©2007-2009 *wrenwatcher
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A google poem. Obviously.

I don't entirely understand what I wanted it to say, but-- I'm pleased with it.

Anyway, perhaps this will prompt me to write a real poem.
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I have never heard of a google poem! Explain to me?

'Cause I want to do one! 'Cause yours turned out so well. It could TOTALLY be like one of those poems the kids have to write essays on, and pretend they know what it's all about. The, uh, flow, the flow is quite lovely. And/or the spacing. Form. Perhaps.

I like it.

--
~Ayan strikes in the night!
A google poem functions kind of like a search engine, except the results are displayed as bits and pieces of text, rather than links. The website's here.

And thank you. That was a really cool response to get.
Awesome.

No problem, man.

--
~Ayan strikes in the night!

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