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I sit and look out upon all the sorrows of the world, and
    upon all injustice and pain,
I hear the soft, whispering voices of two young women in despair
    because the country they call home won't acknowledge their love,
I see the old man sprawled in an alley, once a hero in a sea of gunfire,
    ignored, cold, homeless,
I see the dissociated little girl lie motionless on her bed, I see
    her father leave the room,
I mark the fierce battles that rage behind closed doors,
    the bruised and angry teenage boy slipping quietly out his window, I see these things,
I see the crooked election, dishonest politician, unfounded war, I see
    another massacre ignored by the media,
I observe a country lied to as its children die, I observe men and women fallen
    and forgotten in sweltering desert heat,
I observe the judgements passed guiltlessly, shamelessly, daily
    upon Muslims, homosexuals, blacks—each one American;
All these—all the unending poverty and hopelessness, I
    sitting look out upon,
See, hear, and am silent.
©2007-2009 *wrenwatcher
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Written for my English class. It's a copy-change poem based on Walt Whitman's I Sit and Look Out. The assignment was to modernize it.

Obviously I can't take complete credit for this poem, but I am proud of it. It feels like I'm saying things that I never even knew I wanted to say.

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Edit 11 March 2009: I just discovered that this was featured here two years ago. Funny!
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Dude. I love yours! Mine was nothing compared to yours

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...Potatos
*speechless*
Your poem is similar to mine but more powerful.
I want to redo mine but we weren't given so much time.
I'll post the original copy-change first then a re-vised one
But yours is just kickass!!!

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In your bed, stealing your sex...I mean...sleep!
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"Americans are possibly the dumbest people on the planet . . . We Americans suffer from an enforced ignorance. Our stupidity is embarrassing." -Michael Moore
Thanks. I thought about you when I wrote it, actually. I figured yours was probably similar.

Yeah, I couldn't think of anything to write during class. I was sick and had a headache. Luckily Ms. Powers said we could rewrite them over the weekend.
o.o

Supa Hadcore.
Holy freaking cow.
I love this so much.

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When live gives you lemons, make SasuNaru fanfictions! :D

ohoho I'm creative.

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like a bright-eyed boy in a candy shop.

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